Tuesday, May 22, 2012

Comments for Kaitlyn and Katelan here

In your comments, please write one thing about the content and information given.  Then, write one thing about the presentation style (the way it was given).

Post all comments under this post, so the students can get feedback for their work.

Thanks,

Mike

13 comments:

  1. Well I guess I can be the first person to post. Right off the bat, good job with your presentation, I know that with speaking to you earlier you guys were having difficulty finding information about Edison's home instead of him, but I think you guys pulled physical locations out of this with remarkable ease. Enjoyed the pictures as well, Edison certainly lived like a king it seemed, i can only imagine what his labs looked like. Good job.

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  2. the format was great. i like the quote you guys used that he said about his mother..

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  3. The style was great and Edison was certainly an interesting person. It was hard for you guys to find pictures of his lab and see how he set it up, but other than that you did wonderful job on your presentation.

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  4. Good PowerPoint and presentation! Never knew Edison was homeschooled

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  5. Very good presentation. I know it can be difficult to find information on the homes not just the historical figures.

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  6. I thought this presentation was very good. It was interesting how his first lab was in his basement and also how his teachers called him dumb! I liked the facts and pictures on the slides.

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  7. Awesome job! You girls were able to capture alot on major information. His house for his wife was beautiful and I did not know he spent his whole life in those labs. To know his teachers called him dumb was crazy. It is wrong to say if people are different they must be dumb.

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  8. Good job guys. Edison was def an eccentric!

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  9. I never knew that Edison started his Education by homeschooling. you both did well and pull it up the presentations clearly.

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  10. Who knew that Edison would sleep in his lab? I found the information in your presentation to be fresh and new. Some many people can tell you the basic information about Edison, but your presentation took it a step further.

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  11. I really enjoyed hereing your presentation. it was interesting to learn that he was homeschooled because it gives me confidence in knowing homeschooled kids can go on to do great things:) you guys had great eye contact and great speaking style. overall great job

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  12. i enjoyed t listen to your project thanks for giving us a good project.

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  13. I enjoyed all the facts and history about Edison, and how he lived his life growing up to the person we all know him as today. Very well done presentation and you two knew your information.

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