Thursday, May 24, 2012

Comments for Brian and Amber here

In your comments, please write one thing about the content and information given.  Then, write one thing about the presentation style (the way it was given).

Post all comments under this post, so the students can get feedback for their work.

Thanks,

Mike

16 comments:

  1. Cool place. I liked the piece Brian did. I def do not have the (you know what's) to do that in front of everybody. Sounds like a place worth a visit.

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  2. This was an awesome presentation. I really liked Brian's poetry he wrote for this. I fit so well and rang true to tie everything together. The clip of the poet in the cafe was so great and I am going to have to look him up. Thank you for keeping peotry alive with the story behind this place.

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  3. Good job finding background information on this place, I had never heard of it, but I can see now that it is a good place where many American Dreams have been made.

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  4. ALSO i loved the examples you guys used of the "spoken word".

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  5. i like the vidoe poetry you guys showed it was great.. he seemed that he had so much energy for peoms. that clip was AWESOME..

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  6. It's so cool that it's a nonprofit organization, and can still be running. That just goes to show that if people love something, they will keep it afloat. Your video example was great!

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  7. this was amazing presentaion i like the brian's place and the people there because how they give attantion for the guy when he was talking.

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  8. i really loved how you guys explained the "spoken word" and this presentation was interesting becouse it talked about where American dreams was made. good job guys.

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  9. What a cool place. I never knew the rich history that is associated with this place. Unfortunately, poetry does not get the attention that it deserves. It uplifting to hear that a place like this still exists. Brian, I thought that your poem was a great example of what spoken poetry is like.

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  10. Very very very interesting. Spoken words and similar poetry has always been something I never really got int, but I thought your passion about the subject made it much more fun. It definitely made a difference.

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  11. i love listening to poems, especially when it's as inspiring as the video you shared.........great job both of you

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  12. I never knew the history that is associated with this place and now realized that society doesn't give attention to poetry and its importance. great job guys.

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  13. brian you did a great job with finding information for this presentation and you did an awsome job with your spoken word poetry:) i loved the video clip on why this place still exsists and your other one as well. great presentation with prezi thanks for the info. on this:) overall GREAT job

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  14. I am glad that i had the chance to watch your presentation. it was good and what I really like the most was the video clips your guys chosed.

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  15. I liked the slides, you did a good job with the layout and the transitions. It was very interesting how this cafe is not a business and runs solely on drink sales and donations!

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  16. You guys did an awesome job with your presentation. I love the story behind the Cafe and how it got started and how it still manages even today! A lot of history and dreams were put into making this Cafe change the lives of so many. Very inspirational!

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